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My Fathers Before Me by ~lupindrake:iconlupindrake:



One,
from four generations back,
moved his whole family here
from Germany just before the First War.
And on the other side,
another did the same.

One, from two generations ago,
worked long, hard hours among machines,
but never missed a birthday—
(not even my brother’s,)
even when he had a heart attack the day before.

Another, from two generations ago,
from the other side,
tried to save his before him
from the water rushing into the boat.
Even though neither of them came back—
he left behind two sons,
and now, many years later, one is mine.

And although I will never be one,
simply because of genetics,
I hope to carry their legacy,
for without them, I would not be here,
or even me.
©2008-2009 ~lupindrake
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Sappy, I know. It probably isn't even really good. But it's personal, even though I just randomly started writing this and couldn't help it--

Some critique on this would be loved none the less, although keep away from changing the events, because all of the events that I mentioned in here really happened, and I can't go around changing family history, now can I?

EDIT 05/09/08: With the help of my former Creative Writing teacher, I edited the poem a bit. What do you think?
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